Sunday, November 22, 2009

There She Goes...


She's walkin on a road looks neverending... bright sunshine, sound of the rufflin leaves and the fragrance of pink blossoms... She walks but doesn't smile... she's calm though, finally calm. She hears a boy scream somewhere behind the trees and rushes towards him following the pain...It was hypnotizing, the pain... She left the blossoms for it... her feet ached yet she ran to the boy... There he was stuck inside a giant seed, wanting to grow out crying out loud to her.... She sang to him and the seed started crackin... n like the rise of the phoenix the boy grew out a man... suddenly there was sunlight again but this time it shone on him... She smiled after a long time.... the birds and the bees came by to see the marvel the boy had turned to and she smiled again...She walked again, this time with the boy....but there was no road ahead... the sunshine on the boy glittered so much that she couldn't see the way anymore.... In fact she couldn't even see the boy anymore.. there was only shimmer! She lost her way, she knew that... she kept walkin there was no sun now... no light around just the darkness, it was soothing to her now- the darkness... faint light of the stars, no moon though... it was all gone... she tread on.. the road under her feet became colder, it was a sheet of ice now.... she walked with no path ahead just walked to know more... as if she was looking for something, lookin for the sun, or the boy to see his glitter again... n then there was a cracking sound- a loud roar indeed, the ice had cracked, her feet in cold water now... she was drownin... she tried screamin but the words never came out... she wanted to shout for help but there was no sound, fightin to breathe the last thought she had- "Why? Who am I callin out to?"

3 comments:

Mistique said...

Its not having what u want, its wanting what u got.....
If you extend a hand, there will always be someone who would be there to hold u.... u just need to have a little faith....
season changes and so does time, the only thing that would never disappoint is the sun !!!!! :) :)
keep moving on, trust urself and others too...

Anonymous said...

from what i know..you are wrong about that part where the boy grows out 2 b a man..had he ..you wouldnt hv lost ur way..mayb you forgot to notice that the gaint seed he ws trapped in didnt completely break away..he is still n it ..alwyz been so..

Thinking Soul... said...

Thats a nice thought... Gud for fiction but i usually write reality thru fiction and this is hw reality has been...

Nice thought neway, why "Anonymous"?