Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Cry On Your Own...


It starts easily like all of them do
Then after a while you'll beg for the truth
Trust would vanish and faith will be no good
Make me a memory and do it with speed
Just open your eyes and follow my lead

For all your episodes what have I to show
Just one fickle heart and we're all alone
Your mounting misery so tenderly meek
It can't find its way when you open to speak

Get away from me don't hurt me more...
If you need to cry just cry on your own...

12 comments:

mistique said...

hey i like ur poem.....! as always i just simply love whatever u write, ofcourse they gooooood!! thats y i like them :)

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

Beautiful. I love the flow. And yes, love and and its impositions are terribly painful. i hope producing such beautiful poetry has been a bit of a cure.

descrying the shadows said...

wow .. i had to read it 5 times...
++it can't find...+ hw true
loved it..

The Queen Bean said...

:) reminds me of all that you told me...you weave words beautifully

Thinking Soul... said...

@Mistique... Thanks a tonne! Feels great..

Thinking Soul... said...

@Akshaya... Well writin it all is always helpful but cure? hmmm... Time Cures...

Thinking Soul... said...

@descrying.. Aww... Thanks!!! :)

Thinking Soul... said...

@ The Queen Bean... I've just tried to explain the path of a sad relationship, I'm sure lots of people can relate to... Nehow.. Thanks a tonne for droppin by... :)

Thespian said...

Awesome! :)

Thinking Soul... said...

@ Thespian.. Thanks..! :)

mayz said...

i somehow relate to this...when we give someone a shoulder to cry on they stick on to us...
i dont feel sad for myself...i feel more sad for dat person coz he/she is neva able to find his/her own then

Thinking Soul... said...

@Mayz... Hmmm.. thats ryt..! u almost caught the pulse of the post..everyone loves shoulders to cry on but all they need to remember is that they are just there to support not to carry you...